Tyree

ms j's digital classroom

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Tyree, you did your best to tell the world about what you've learned about Jim Brown! Good work! You can raise your grade by submitting a revision where you change the name "Jim Brown" to "I"! Remember, in this story, YOU are pretending to BE Jim Brown!

Proficiency Scores

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Focus

You're getting better at staying on topic in your writing, which is good progress! Keep trying to stay focused on your main idea throughout your piece.

Purpose

You're starting to get a clear message across in your writing, even though you sometimes wander off topic. Keep focusing on your main idea!

Content

You include some information, but adding more details would help make your writing better.

Imagery

Deepen your imagery by developing richer descriptive language and sensory details to immerse readers in your narrative.

Storyline

Strive for a more coherent and consistent storyline by fleshing out your characters, conflicts, and resolutions.

Syntax

Diversify your sentence structures to add fluency and variety to your writing, avoiding repetition.

Context

Keep refining your context by adding details that really enhance the story's clarity and engagement.

Technique

Experiment with different writing techniques to make your writing more interesting.

Sensory Language

Include more sensory details to make your writing more engaging.